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Yellow Dog
10-25-2007, 04:34 PM
This really was for a paper in my english class about exaggerations and such. I thought you people would like it :rolleyes: Enjoy!!
Yellow Dog
10-25-2007, 04:49 PM
If you see any spelling or other mistakes please tell me right away! Thanks!
KatzNK9
10-25-2007, 04:55 PM
Well done! Cute story.
Correct the spelling of these words:
Chihuahua
viscious
tha- should be that
In the last paragraph, I'd change the word "lay" to "lie" down
Yellow Dog
10-25-2007, 04:56 PM
Thanks for the corrections!! :D
happysaz133
10-25-2007, 05:03 PM
Aw wow I love it :D you're a great writer!
Yellow Dog
10-25-2007, 05:05 PM
Aw wow I love it :D you're a great writer!
Thanks!!! :D
skunkstripe
10-27-2007, 10:25 AM
Nice story Yellow Dog! You're pretty good! :thumb:
Yellow Dog
10-27-2007, 10:57 AM
Nice story Yellow Dog! You're pretty good! :thumb:
Thanks Everyone! :D :cool: