River Of Tears
12-13-2006, 06:45 PM
So, I started off by writing stories (posted some on here :P) And then moved on to poems, I love doing it but I dont feel I am very good... :) Soo I thoguht Id get your opinions!!!! :D
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Why Do You Want To Be One Of Them?
Why do you always have to put on that stupid little act?
The one with the bubbly smile, and that giggly laugh - you never used to act like that.
Why can’t you just let them see you for what you are?
The girl that has always wanted to be herself, and dressed however she wanted.
Why can’t you just show them who you really are?
The one who didn’t care what anyone thought, and didn’t judge anyone else.
Why can’t everybody love you for who you are?
The little girl who used to be nice to everyone - what was wrong with that?
Why can’t anyone else see the person I see?
The girl you used to be, the one that would never forget me.
Why cant they just look at you and like what they see?
I know they can if they look down far, ‘cause I know what a good friend you are.
I see you standing there, laughing at their stupid jokes.
Doing anything you must to be part of the crowd.
Wearing whatever clothes are in style, trying your best to be one of them.
Wearing your hair like the hottest celebrity, coating your face in makeup.
What makes you act the way you do?
Why do you want to be one of them?
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Tell me what you thinkI am still a newbie writer... But I love doing it :)
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Why Do You Want To Be One Of Them?
Why do you always have to put on that stupid little act?
The one with the bubbly smile, and that giggly laugh - you never used to act like that.
Why can’t you just let them see you for what you are?
The girl that has always wanted to be herself, and dressed however she wanted.
Why can’t you just show them who you really are?
The one who didn’t care what anyone thought, and didn’t judge anyone else.
Why can’t everybody love you for who you are?
The little girl who used to be nice to everyone - what was wrong with that?
Why can’t anyone else see the person I see?
The girl you used to be, the one that would never forget me.
Why cant they just look at you and like what they see?
I know they can if they look down far, ‘cause I know what a good friend you are.
I see you standing there, laughing at their stupid jokes.
Doing anything you must to be part of the crowd.
Wearing whatever clothes are in style, trying your best to be one of them.
Wearing your hair like the hottest celebrity, coating your face in makeup.
What makes you act the way you do?
Why do you want to be one of them?
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Tell me what you thinkI am still a newbie writer... But I love doing it :)